The writer’s workshop was very helpful to point me in the right direction to complete and perfect my writing. After working on a piece for so long the words become so familiar it is almost essential to have other eyes critique it. Also, these people were not present for the actual rhetoric event so it was good to see whether or not they understood or were interested in the lecture. I was interested to see that most people have the same reaction to the lecture as I did, at first it seemed boring, but after actually hearing the information it was fascinating. I was definitely pointed in the right direction to include more of an introduction and the set the stage of the audience. I learned that it would be beneficial to highlight upon more examples and specifics of the lecture, specifically examples of general ethics. People were also interested to hear the individual cases that he discussed along with the audience’s reactions. It was definitely an indicator that after reading my paper people had some questions about the lecture that they felt were unanswered. I now know that there are some details that people would like to hear about that I would include. I will also work on using some more synonyms to switch up my word choosing. People were also intrigued as to hear the difference between the ethics in Mongolia that I touched upon. Basically, there are areas in which I will go more in-depth. The workshop also gave me the confidence that my writing was interesting and that I was going in the right direction.
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