After the Workshop - Marysia Watson

I thought the workshop was extremely helpful.  Before coming to class, I knew some of the parts that I needed to work on.  It was great that people listened to what parts I thought needed work.  Everyone was great at picking up on what I thought was wrong and giving me ideas to improve the assignment.   After reading my piece out loud, I realized that although it was extremely informative, for what I was trying to do, it was essential that it be this way.  I felt that RFK jr used a lot of rhetorical techniques in his speech that I wanted to implicitly point out.  It was interesting to see how different Kristen's piece was compared to mine.  I will try to incorporate some of her descriptions into my piece.  Everyone was a great help, and, with a little revision, I will post my DenveRhetor description piece soon!